Nowadays,discrimination about gender has been faded away.In current time,both genders are doing work.I am agree with this concept, but i also believe there are some reasons for this reluctance
In many developing countries,women does not feel to tie the knot.one of the main reason for this unwillingness is over expectations. Women should understand that it is very hard to make a wonderful life from the very beginning.In recent research of Japan, many women feels that men does not fulfill their all desires, and keeps them hand to mouth.
The second reason is that, the foremost reason for those women who do not want to get married is loss of freedom.As before marriage,there are no restrictions on girls to go outside.Easily, women could go outside without any permission.According to new research,women believes that after marriage the level of responsibility would increase on them.That is why, most of the women wants to get married.
To sum up,women should reduce their expectations.Moreover,with marriage we can stop such terrible effects than can be harmful for our society.
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I agree with this concept
, but I also
women do not feel the need to tie the knot
one of the main reasons
many women claimed that
(The second reason is that, the foremost reason for those women who do not want to get married is loss of freedom)
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women believe that
women want to
with marriage
that can be harmful to our society