In Pakistan there is a condition of traffic in big cities like Lahore is atrocious and grim.The traffic problems are thriving day by day due to large number of population.The expand in traffic has also enlarge the number of accidents and our roads are prospering treacherous during these days.Traffic troubles are getting worse.The rising number of smoke evacuating vehicles polluted the fresh air and people are badly effected by demonic of air pollution.
9.5/10
excellent!
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