Selfishness the most devastating eveil in this world. There are so many people who are infected with this bad habbit and causing damage to the society and their near one’s as a whole. Undoubtely its very difficult to get out of this and behave like a good person and feel ache for other and to build up a spirit in oneself to help other and do some thing better for the mankind. Apart for this being a Muslim our religion also teachs us brotherhood and to like the same thing as we like or choose for ourselves. We should try out atmost to prevent our societies from getting contaminated with selfish people and promote a sense of humanitiy and kindness. There are many activites which i saw in my daily life which caused me unhappiness and i want to play my role in this in order to overcome them and made them right. However i feel sever pain when i see that our illeterate innocent public elect selfish people in elections. I will try to illobrate it further in below peragaph.
It is a better truth of my country Pakistan that a large portion of our population is poor and lack of education, therefore they are still incapable to recognize the power of their vote and the change which they can create by using their votes wisely and unfortunately they cast their vote to selfish people who does not perform any kind of productive work for those people who make them elected and have chosen them as their leader. Eventually when these selfish people came in to rule they just think about themselves and their families. They work day and night in growing up their bank balances and building properties. Resultently deprive these poor people from the basic necessities of life and leave up them in a very miserable condition, which causes me serious unhappiness.
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* habit and they are contaminating the society
It is indeed an arduous task to have compassion and empathy for people, but we need to have as a human being.
I feel severe pain when I see the people electing corrupt politicians as their leaders.
It is the bitter truth of my country that that a portion of our population is poor and illiterate. People lack the basic knowledge to understand or fathom corrupt people.
Who do not perform their duties
come into power
As a result of this, the people are deprived of the basic needs.