Money is as important as blood in our body. It is great invention of a men, as it is essential to live in this world. All of our daily needs depend on money, as in primitive society there were limited needs and sources .Money is wonderful invention as in course of time it improve the human life and eliminate the Barter system. Barter system was inconvenient for human as it was exchange of commodity to commodity.
No one can live without money. We need to buy food and many basic necessities of life which are impossible to be bought without money. A rich man is seen in the society with respect and people around carry an honorable position for that man whereas a poor person is seen by people with the eyes of hatred and they do not poses a good impression. It became prevailed with the passage of time and human can now easily buy anything without hard process of barter system.
But as we are living in the modern era everyone want to become more rich and powerful. Due to the dearth of money many people use inhuman way to get it. Because it comes into a picture of facilitate human to have a luxurious life. I understand and believe that money is the most important key of happiness gifted by the God. It depend on human to take anything in different ways. Some people take it only to fulfill their physical needs and they never take it heartily however some people understand everything to the money and they can do anything for getting the money.
* depends on money
improves
It became ubiquitous over the time
everyone wants
dearth of resources
7/10
Much better!