Today i wanna talk about car. I want to share mine experience with our own home car. Car is very good ride for peoples who is living in a society. That persons who have their own car they can easily go anywhere as they want. We can adjust 5,6 peoples in car and go to picnics or their relatives together. Car is very useful. Sometimes we are in Road and it’s 1 hour require to reach home and due to weather rain starts so we can turn our car mirrors up and we are save from rainy or bad weather. furthermore Car is four wheeler which have good grip on road or better grip then bikes and other 2 wheeler’s. And it’s have better security then other 2 wheeler’s in car we can take seat belt so we are save from unexpected event. Now a days car getting more secure and comfortable. that days cars coming with good facilities such as air conditional, music systems and televisions and many more. so peoples who have their own latest car they can make long ride more comfortable than old low facilities cars.
I make 2 grammar mistakes.
1. better grip then bikes. better grip than bikes.
2. And it’s have better security then other 2 wheeler’s And it’s have better security than other 2 wheeler’s.
Sir, Please Review other mistakes in this essay. Thank you.