A school is a place where children started their learning from grass root level. Schools provide a foundation and plays an integral part in child’s brought up. A child has a raw brain and has the best ability to absorb anything what we taught. Schools are not supposed to be bound for similar interest or for a particular studies. Suppose if we allow only children of similar interest in schools then where the else will go, the other way around would be to have different schools for different interest but it would be very hard to manage at this level. In that case we supposed to have a school of business minded children, and a school for those who love music. In that case we will have a different school for different occupation. We will eventually creating discrimination and probably an unhealthy competition between the children.
Schools should be open for all children with varied interest. However what we can do is to provide a verity in learning. A part from math, science and literature classes there should be a class for business studies. You can add recreational activities in the school. At this age children needs concealing what we have to do is to pay attention to each student individually and know what he wants to do. What are his or her strong and weak areas. Also it would be hard to separate children based on their interest and if we possibly do that thing at this level then what if the interest changes. So at least at school level it should be open for every students.
we have make an environment where child believe on cooperation instead of just competition. We need to improve our schools system. We also have to train our teachers and make them capable to judge that what child wants to be in his future, rather than just focusing on who stood first, second and third. In this way we can better train our children’s and help them achieving their goals
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Band 6.5
Mr. Jawwad if you remove these grammatical errors you would get more than Band 7