As a student of communication, I must say that language is the foremost element to have an effective communication. In simple words, communication is an act of transforming information from one place to another, through different mediums and expressions. And language is the essence of every communication, which can also be a barrier while communicating if you are not aware of that language well or your audience cannot understand you. Language is not just about the words you utter, but of various types like non-verbal or written ways of communicating. Non-verbal communication contains, body language, your gestures, even the way you dress or act is all about your language. And written communication is about the mixture of words we use to create a sentence to build various writing stuff. Even the way we encode or decode something is according to our language understanding. Language plays a vital role in our lives.
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Excellent!
There are some sentences which have an issue regarding parallelism, but apart from those others are really good.
Sir what is parallelism in writing ?