Band 7 Mr. Jawad please look at the minor mistakes you make. You can easily get Band 7.5 I would be discussing it with you tomorrow. * will be gradually increased if the worker gets retired
Band 7
Mr. Jawad please look at the minor mistakes you make. You can easily get Band 7.5
I would be discussing it with you tomorrow.
* will be gradually increased
if the worker gets retired
5/10 other activities which enable the people to enjoy there are many restaurants people can enjoy their meals people are of city are very cordial there are many types of restaurants One of my Japanese friends Although there are myriad social activities, we are deprived of musical festivals and concRead more
5/10
other activities which enable the people to enjoy
there are many restaurants
people can enjoy their meals
people are of city are very cordial
there are many types of restaurants
One of my Japanese friends
Although there are myriad social activities, we are deprived of musical festivals and concerts.
In the conclusion I would recommend you to
Women’s British Open Victory is first by a Thai at a major.
8/10
8/10
See lessChildren are the impressions of their parents’ behavior. If a child behaves badly, his parents should be considered responsible and should be punished. How far do you agree with this?
Band 7.5! *those of their parents Excellent!
Band 7.5!
*those of their parents
Excellent!
See lessHamilton needs little help in winning 4th straight race.
8/10
8/10
See lessTO ACHIEVE SUCCESS WE SHOULD WORK HARD
Band 6. There are many grammatical error.
Band 6. There are many grammatical error.
See lessfarmers in the third world country have to suffer alot. what are the reasons and solution to that.
Band 7 Excellent information and much more planned! Keep it up
Band 7
See lessExcellent information and much more planned!
Keep it up
we should never make plans as they never workout
6.5
6.5
See lessWe should never rely on opinions of celebrities. Do you agree or disagree.
* Celebrity What is customers' tariff An epitome of reliability
* Celebrity
See lessWhat is customers’ tariff
An epitome of reliability
We should never rely on opinions of celebrities. Do you agree or disagree.
Band 6.5
Band 6.5
See lessSome parents grow their children in strict discipline while others leave them free to learn lessons of lives on their own. Which is one of these is a better approach and why?
Band 7.5 to 8.0 This is a very good essay!
Band 7.5 to 8.0
See lessThis is a very good essay!
Are Celebrities’ Opinions Right?
Band 8
Band 8
See lessThe idea of going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people.But while it may offer some advantages,it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in different culture.
* if anyone gets a chance healthy lifestyles one of my friends
* if anyone gets a chance
See lesshealthy lifestyles
one of my friends
In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, when in other people can work until they are 65 or 70.until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment.
Band 7 Mr. Jawad please look at the minor mistakes you make. You can easily get Band 7.5 I would be discussing it with you tomorrow. * will be gradually increased if the worker gets retired
Band 7
Mr. Jawad please look at the minor mistakes you make. You can easily get Band 7.5
I would be discussing it with you tomorrow.
* will be gradually increased
See lessif the worker gets retired
Capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be abolished.
Band 7.5 this thing varies from case to case Excellent! You covered everything.
Band 7.5
this thing varies from case to case
Excellent! You covered everything.
See lessAdmission in School as per pupils interests
Band 8 Excellent!
Band 8
See lessExcellent!
to achieve success we should work hard. agree or disagree?
7/9
7/9
See lessMedical researchers, cosmetic companies, and others often perform experiments on animals. Many people feel that experimentation on animals is wrong and should be stopped immediately because animals do feel pain, and there are other alternatives. How do you feel? State your position and explain your reasons.
9/10 Nice effort!
9/10
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According to some people, elderly drivers should be required to reapply for their driving licenses because with age comes diminished vision, hearing, and reaction time. How do you feel about this issue? Explain what you think should be done and why.
9/10 Excellent!
9/10
See lessExcellent!
Diabetes
7/10
7/10
See lessMany people believe that television violence has a negative effect on society because it promotes violence. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
7/10 Have had has somehow been have not been
7/10
Have had
See lesshas somehow been
have not been
Obesity
10/10 Excellent!
10/10
See lessExcellent!
Favorite Color
4/10 * White color shows Muslims wear white color during the performance of Hajj
4/10
* White color shows
See lessMuslims wear white color during the performance of Hajj
favorite poet
6/10
6/10
See lessMy Favourite Car
3/10 Has a dream his or her own car I also its luxury car
3/10
Has a dream
See lesshis or her own car
I also
its
luxury car
My Favourite Teacher
3/10 He lives He taught me teacher He also handles which is called " Khidmat Khaliq" He love simplicity * Please rewrite it below
3/10
He lives
He taught me
teacher
He also handles
which is called ” Khidmat Khaliq”
He love simplicity
* Please rewrite it below
See lessMy Favorite Country
4/10 loves and admires I have due to its environment * The word is patriot and it is not a verb.
4/10
loves and admires
See lessI have
due to its environment
* The word is patriot and it is not a verb.
EDUCATION
9/10
9/10
See lessMy favourite country
9/10 Excellent!
9/10
See lessExcellent!
My favourite town
6/10 There are many sources of entertainment awe-inspiring theme parks It would be arduous for me
6/10
See lessThere are many sources of entertainment
awe-inspiring theme parks
It would be arduous for me
Favourite number
7/10!
7/10!
See lessMy favourite city
5/10 other activities which enable the people to enjoy there are many restaurants people can enjoy their meals people are of city are very cordial there are many types of restaurants One of my Japanese friends Although there are myriad social activities, we are deprived of musical festivals and concRead more
5/10
See lessother activities which enable the people to enjoy
there are many restaurants
people can enjoy their meals
people are of city are very cordial
there are many types of restaurants
One of my Japanese friends
Although there are myriad social activities, we are deprived of musical festivals and concerts.
In the conclusion I would recommend you to
To what extent do the media influence people’s social behaviour?
*affecting 9/10!
*affecting
See less9/10!
In many countries,citizens are required to serve in the military for a year or more.Do you believe theat United States should institue a similar practice.why pr why not?
10/10 Excellent!
10/10
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We all have favorite activities that we enjoy. Write an essay convincing readers to try the activity that you enjoy most.
7/10 Very Good! Somebody loves
7/10
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Somebody loves
Explain the purpose of internet .includes various viewpoints,including that of users and providers.
4/10 is communication and information sharing These are very few words.
4/10
is communication and information sharing
These are very few words.
See lessMath is a required subject. Explain why is it so important.
3/10
3/10
See lessMany people believe that television violence has a negative effect on society because it promote violence.Do you agree or disagree?Use specific reason and example to support your answer.
7/10 It is true Role of the villian as compared to
7/10
See lessIt is true
Role of the villian
as compared to
According to some people,elderly drivers should be required to reapply for driving license because with age comes diminish vision ,hearing and reaction time.How you feel about this issue?Explain what you think should be done and why?
8/10 functioning of human body starts to lower down
8/10
See lessfunctioning of human body starts to lower down
Girls Schools Gaining Popularity
* Belief 7/10
* Belief
See less7/10
Volunteer Time for NGOs
* source of happiness to others
* source of happiness to others
See lessGiving Monthly Allowance to children
* I vehemently support the notion that 7/10
* I vehemently support the notion that
7/10
See lessHuman cloning
8/10 Very good!!
8/10
See lessVery good!!
Up Bringing of Orphans
* many of them are deprived or divested of 8/10
* many of them are deprived or divested of
8/10
See lessImportance of Field Trips for Students
7/10 You could have written more!
7/10
See lessYou could have written more!
Advantages and Disadvantages of Multinationals
10/10 Very Good! You missed nothing!
10/10
See lessVery Good!
You missed nothing!
Joint Ventures and Franchises.
10/10 Excellent!!!
10/10
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Experiments on animals
9/10
9/10
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10/10
10/10
See lessAWA Essay
3/6 Very Good!
3/6
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To what extent is the nuclear family still the most dominant type of family, in the modern industrial families?
10/10
10/10
See lessIncreased Competition and it’s impact.
10/10 Excellent!
10/10
See lessExcellent!