*Two schools of thought What is the meaning of advanced language? To speak in a foreign language has become imperative Has been made as an official language You should have been developed better TA: 6.0-7.0 LR:7.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 CC:7.0 Overall: 6.0-6.5 If you would have developed the other point of viRead more
*Two schools of thought
What is the meaning of advanced language?
To speak in a foreign language has become imperative
Has been made as an official language
You should have been developed better
TA: 6.0-7.0
LR:7.0
GRA: 6.0-7.0
CC:7.0
Overall: 6.0-6.5
If you would have developed the other point of view, the score would have been much better.
* Immense for them Among all my cousins, We are not just good cousins We have studied at the same school We spend quality time with each other Do our home assignments together with whom I have an amiable relationship
* Immense for them
Among all my cousins,
We are not just good cousins
We have studied at the same school
We spend quality time with each other
Do our home assignments together
with whom I have an amiable relationship
* I am a writer, but I do not have enough words That she does for us Mother is always eager to fulfill the desires of her children She is still teaching me on how deal with the obstacles and hurdles in my life
* I am a writer, but I do not have enough words
That she does for us
Mother is always eager to fulfill the desires of her children
She is still teaching me on how deal with the obstacles and hurdles in my life
* I can't She provides us She normally indulged in household chores Although children irritate her a lot, she works for the entire day to provide them comfort Mothers have to face so many hardships while giving birth to children One should always respect and love the mother
* I can’t
She provides us
She normally indulged in household chores
Although children irritate her a lot, she works for the entire day to provide them comfort
Mothers have to face so many hardships while giving birth to children
One should always respect and love the mother
* I concur with the statement harmful that doctors many advertisements have been made which have been making people aware those who smoke are more vulnerable to contract a disease This sentence is wrong- Organization, which is an international health organization, is also mesmerizing the people twarRead more
* I concur with the statement
harmful
that doctors
many advertisements have been made which have been making people aware
those who smoke are more vulnerable to contract a disease
This sentence is wrong- Organization, which is an international health organization, is also mesmerizing the people tward this desease.
You have to write this sentence again. (In my opinion, playing video games is very recreational spare time activity for juvenile and for children.) Whenever I am sad preferred ;hence, I love to play it
You have to write this sentence again.
(In my opinion, playing video games is very recreational spare time activity for juvenile and for children.)
Whenever I am sad
preferred
;hence, I love to play it
* I know every but on weekends, I go there. (As I told you before that I go there every week, I know about the entire place.) I always go there for shopping I go there for grovery
* I know every
but on weekends, I go there.
(As I told you before that I go there every week, I know about the entire place.)
I always go there for shopping
I go there for grovery
TA: 6.0-7.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 LR: 7.0 CC:6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.5 *You cannot use as with but. People are getting greedier sexual-based stuff (Despite of this fact,what our media industry doing is shameful for us) This sentence needs to be written again. Tobacco has a detrimental effect on a person's healthRead more
*You cannot use as with but.
People are getting greedier
sexual-based stuff
(Despite of this fact,what our media industry doing is shameful for us) This sentence needs to be written again.
Tobacco has a detrimental effect on a person’s health
The government should devise a plan to take stern action against those who are promoting unethical marketing practices.
TA: 8.0 CC:7.0 LR: 8.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 Overall: 7.0-7.5 * Boasting (Why was this word used?) Cannot be gainsaid helps individuals every student does not have on the student's personality development Later, it enables not only... but also open-air activities
* Boasting (Why was this word used?)
Cannot be gainsaid
helps individuals
every student does not have
on the student’s personality development
Later, it enables
not only… but also
open-air activities
TA:7.0-8.0 GRA:7.0 LR:7.0 CC:7.0 Overall:7.0-7.5 * Please look at this sentence. I think it needs to be written again. (it can be changed only partially because we can societal outlook towards a particular profession or stream.)
TA:7.0-8.0
GRA:7.0
LR:7.0
CC:7.0
Overall:7.0-7.5
* Please look at this sentence. I think it needs to be written again. (it can be changed only partially because we can societal outlook towards a particular profession or stream.)
TA: 6.0 GRA:5.0-6.0 CC:6.0 LR:6.0 Overall: 5.5 * Modern generation is busier This sentence is an incomplete sentence complex sentence (Even though they have greed of earning money and become more rich than other.) Traditions of our ancestors are being forgotten on a child's life Everyone has becomeRead more
TA: 6.0
GRA:5.0-6.0
CC:6.0
LR:6.0
Overall: 5.5
* Modern generation is busier
This sentence is an incomplete sentence complex sentence
(Even though they have greed of earning money and become more rich than other.)
Traditions of our ancestors are being forgotten
on a child’s life
Everyone has become selfish
To earn money
TA:4.0 GRA:5.0 LR:6.0 CC:6.0 Overall: 5.0- * foreign visitors want to than is charged from people they often want to many tourists spent around 200 million To recapitulate, I think (This essay was not on the topic) The topic required you to talk about foreign tourists rather than on overseas PakistaRead more
TA:4.0
GRA:5.0
LR:6.0
CC:6.0
Overall: 5.0-
* foreign visitors want to
than is charged from people
they often want to
many tourists spent
around 200 million
To recapitulate, I think
(This essay was not on the topic)
The topic required you to talk about foreign tourists rather than on overseas Pakistanis.
TA:4.0-5.0 LR: 6.0 GRA: 6.9 CC: 5.0 Overall:5.0 You could have easily achieved 6.5 if you would have written more than 250 words. * I totally agree Please watch the lectures I have made on facebook. The page is "pacans education" You will have to present, extend and support your idea. The ideas areRead more
TA:4.0-5.0
LR: 6.0
GRA: 6.9
CC: 5.0
Overall:5.0
You could have easily achieved 6.5 if you would have written more than 250 words.
* I totally agree
Please watch the lectures I have made on facebook. The page is “pacans education”
You will have to present, extend and support your idea. The ideas are not being developed. Moreover, you are required to write more than 250 words.
TA: 7.0 GRA:5.0-6.0 LR: 6.0-7.0 CC:6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.0- *Nowadays, people are concerned about I disagree with this point are very much concerned women look younger In today's era, mundane lives who are we to band these products we should ban the These chemicals can be harmful that are being used woRead more
*Nowadays,
people are concerned about
I disagree with this point
are very much concerned
women look younger
In today’s era,
mundane lives
who are we to band these products
we should ban the
These chemicals can be harmful
that are being used worldwide
TA: 7.0-8.0 CC:7.0 GRA:6.0 LR:6.0-7.0 Overall:6.5 *A family believed that it was its core responsibility to take of elders. As time is passing, we are becoming more advanced we were dependent upon them they put all their efforts to nurture us (You have to remove the comma after since) recently publiRead more
TA: 7.0-8.0
CC:7.0
GRA:6.0
LR:6.0-7.0
Overall:6.5
*A family believed that it was its core responsibility to take of elders.
As time is passing, we are becoming more advanced
we were dependent upon them
they put all their efforts to nurture us
(You have to remove the comma after since)
recently published in their
it is observed
are more skeptical and at the same time
You have to improve this statement
(In my opinion , what you do with others will definitely get back to you as earth is round.)
* so that you could be adept in your relevant field that by being an adult You will use moreover instead of "on the other hand" "In conclusion, I would like to say that," You have to remove comma which comes after that TA:6.0-7.0 CC:7.0 LR:6.0-7.0 GRA:6.0-7.0 Overall:6.5 You should have given a cleaRead more
* so that you could be adept in your relevant field
that by being an adult
You will use moreover instead of “on the other hand”
“In conclusion, I would like to say that,”
You have to remove comma which comes after that
* some people think most of the people assume that Those type of people Money is important, but one cannot gainsay the importance of time (Please put examples to take your band up) TA: 6.0-7.0 CC: 6.0 LR: 7.0 GRA:6.0 Overall: 6.0-6.5
* some people think
most of the people assume that
Those type of people
Money is important, but one cannot gainsay the importance of time
* In my opinion, Because, if all the people are getting the same salary regardless the effort they put in their work, then this will demoralize those who work harder Although, TA:7.0 CC: 6.0-7.0 GRA: 6.0 LR: 7.0 Overall: 6.5
* In my opinion,
Because, if all the people are getting the same salary regardless the effort they put in their work, then this will demoralize those who work harder
* tourism is increasing is dramatically when a punch of tourists came across the country it brings in money. The income generated through tourism can make a significant proportion in the national income. You need to develop your ideas and also support it with examples TA: 5.0-6.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 LR: 6.Read more
* tourism is increasing is dramatically
when a punch of tourists came across the country it brings in money. The income generated through tourism can make a significant proportion in the national income.
You need to develop your ideas and also support it with examples
* You will have to watch the video related to CC and TA You have to put one main idea for each paragraph, but you have put 3 to 4 ideas for each paragraph. You will have to write this essay again ad they would be requiring you to develop your ideas. TA:5.0-6.0 GRA: 7.0 CC: 6.0 LR: 7.0 Overall: 6.0
* You will have to watch the video related to CC and TA
You have to put one main idea for each paragraph, but you have put 3 to 4 ideas for each paragraph.
You will have to write this essay again ad they would be requiring you to develop your ideas.
* war-related ,so that they can Many of the parents ignore that despite of many benefits and charms, modern technology has its drawbacks as well. May parents ignore the fact that although it might provide some benefits, it has some drawbacks too.
* war-related
,so that they can
Many of the parents ignore that despite of many benefits and charms, modern technology has its drawbacks as well.
May parents ignore the fact that although it might provide some benefits, it has some drawbacks too.
* One needs his or her loved one every individual is attracted to his or her is in their own room, chatting and messaging online among family members via their technological devices. Nowadays, They show apathy towards those who are close to them Consequently, they spend less time with their members,Read more
* One needs his or her loved one
every individual is attracted to his or her
is in their own room, chatting and messaging online among family members via their technological devices.
Nowadays,
They show apathy towards those who are close to them
Consequently, they spend less time with their members, which results in weaker relationships.
Be more sociable and
You need to
TA: 6.0
GRA: 7.0
CC: 6.0
LR: 6.0-7.0
Overall: 6.5
I would talk to you regarding the format of the essay.
* ,which can make Your essay is a very good one, but there is a serious problem pertaining to paragraphing, coherence, and development of ideas. You could have easily achieved 7.0 to 7.5 Please watch the latest video on pacans education related to writing task 2 in which this concept has been explaiRead more
* ,which can make
Your essay is a very good one, but there is a serious problem pertaining to paragraphing, coherence, and development of ideas. You could have easily achieved 7.0 to 7.5
Please watch the latest video on pacans education related to writing task 2 in which this concept has been explained.
* ,so they have to You need to remove comma after although ,so that they could and so does the interest in studies ,but TA:8.0 GRA: 7.0 CC-7.9 LR:7.0 Overall: 7.0 A very good attempt
* ,so they have to
You need to remove comma after although
,so that they could
and so does the interest in studies
,but
* ,and the measures Do not put comma after even though Do not use even though with but (As the human population grows, so is the waste produced by us, which contaminates the earth and pollutes our rivers and seas.) TA:7.0 GRA:7.0 CC:6.0-7.0 LR: 6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.5
* ,and the measures
Do not put comma after even though
Do not use even though with but
(As the human population grows, so is the waste produced by us, which contaminates the earth and pollutes our rivers and seas.)
* is considered one of the most important parts Some say manifold benefits On the one hand, some people claim they can tell us about Nike they have advertisements to Moreover, From my point of view, To make people aware of TA:6-7 GRA:6 LR:6 CC:6 Overall: 6.0
* is considered one of the most important parts
Some say
manifold benefits
On the one hand,
some people claim
they can tell us about
Nike
they have advertisements to
Moreover,
From my point of view,
To make people aware of
* have always been known for ,so that the books (service providing the information on online websites licenses us and it we don’t actually see i) TA:8 GRA:7 LR:7.0-8:0 CC: 7.0 Overall: 7.5 It was a very well-written essay, but it was a bit too long. Did you complete it in 40 minutes?
* have always been known for
,so that the books
(service providing the information on online websites licenses us and it we don’t actually see i)
TA:8
GRA:7
LR:7.0-8:0
CC: 7.0
Overall: 7.5
It was a very well-written essay, but it was a bit too long. Did you complete it in 40 minutes?
ever-changing but has also ,which consequently In 2018, the study by MIT reported that TA:6-7 CC:6 LR:7-8 GRA:7 Overall: 6.5 to 7.0 Comments: Linking devices, complex sentences are missing. The conclusion is also missing.
ever-changing
but has also
,which consequently
In 2018, the study by MIT reported that
TA:6-7
CC:6
LR:7-8
GRA:7
Overall: 6.5 to 7.0
Comments: Linking devices, complex sentences are missing.
The conclusion is also missing.
* being squandered could be used to ameliorate the conditions of people belief is true dreams to their own territories it failed in its plans This essay is having many mistakes. It would be at 5.0 to 5.5
* being squandered
could be used to ameliorate the conditions of people
belief is true
dreams to
their own territories
it failed in its plans
This essay is having many mistakes. It would be at 5.0 to 5.5
Paragraph on My Favourite Indoor activity
* but my preferred for everybody at home admires her good on how to cook food my siblings like biryani No one can match her taste
* but my preferred
See lessfor everybody at home
admires her good
on how to cook food
my siblings like biryani
No one can match her taste
Being able to speak a foreign language can be helpful in many situations in life. Some people believe that children should begin studying a foreign language in primary school while others believe children should not start until secondary school. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
*Two schools of thought What is the meaning of advanced language? To speak in a foreign language has become imperative Has been made as an official language You should have been developed better TA: 6.0-7.0 LR:7.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 CC:7.0 Overall: 6.0-6.5 If you would have developed the other point of viRead more
*Two schools of thought
What is the meaning of advanced language?
To speak in a foreign language has become imperative
Has been made as an official language
You should have been developed better
TA: 6.0-7.0
LR:7.0
GRA: 6.0-7.0
CC:7.0
Overall: 6.0-6.5
If you would have developed the other point of view, the score would have been much better.
See lessParagraph on My Favourite Aunt
* Preferred aunt and has an optimistic personality From the day she came into my life, she has showered love and happiness. For that reason,
* Preferred aunt
See lessand has an optimistic personality
From the day she came into my life, she has showered love and happiness.
For that reason,
Paragraph on my favourite uncle
* All of my uncles love me a lot I treat them with reverence He always mesmerizes me Good paragraph!!
* All of my uncles love me a lot
I treat them with reverence
He always mesmerizes me
Good paragraph!!
See lessParagraph on My Favourite cousin
* Immense for them Among all my cousins, We are not just good cousins We have studied at the same school We spend quality time with each other Do our home assignments together with whom I have an amiable relationship
* Immense for them
See lessAmong all my cousins,
We are not just good cousins
We have studied at the same school
We spend quality time with each other
Do our home assignments together
with whom I have an amiable relationship
Paragraph on My Father
No one can love a child the way father does Amongst my relatives, He has always guided me about everything is a very civilized manner
No one can love a child the way father does
See lessAmongst my relatives,
He has always guided me about everything is a very civilized manner
Short Paragraph on Mother
* I am a writer, but I do not have enough words That she does for us Mother is always eager to fulfill the desires of her children She is still teaching me on how deal with the obstacles and hurdles in my life
* I am a writer, but I do not have enough words
See lessThat she does for us
Mother is always eager to fulfill the desires of her children
She is still teaching me on how deal with the obstacles and hurdles in my life
Short Paragraph on My mother
* I can't She provides us She normally indulged in household chores Although children irritate her a lot, she works for the entire day to provide them comfort Mothers have to face so many hardships while giving birth to children One should always respect and love the mother
* I can’t
See lessShe provides us
She normally indulged in household chores
Although children irritate her a lot, she works for the entire day to provide them comfort
Mothers have to face so many hardships while giving birth to children
One should always respect and love the mother
Smoking has been proven to be seriously harmful to the smoker d also the surrounding people, It should be therefor banned in public places. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
* I concur with the statement harmful that doctors many advertisements have been made which have been making people aware those who smoke are more vulnerable to contract a disease This sentence is wrong- Organization, which is an international health organization, is also mesmerizing the people twarRead more
* I concur with the statement
harmful
that doctors
many advertisements have been made which have been making people aware
those who smoke are more vulnerable to contract a disease
This sentence is wrong- Organization, which is an international health organization, is also mesmerizing the people tward this desease.
Diseases
damaging smoke
TA-6.0
See lessGRA-5.0
LR-7.0
CC-6.0
Overall: 5.5
Paragraph on My Favourite video game.
You have to write this sentence again. (In my opinion, playing video games is very recreational spare time activity for juvenile and for children.) Whenever I am sad preferred ;hence, I love to play it
You have to write this sentence again.
See less(In my opinion, playing video games is very recreational spare time activity for juvenile and for children.)
Whenever I am sad
preferred
;hence, I love to play it
Paragraph on My Favourite Mall
*grocery
*grocery
See lessParagraph on My Favourite Mall
* I know every but on weekends, I go there. (As I told you before that I go there every week, I know about the entire place.) I always go there for shopping I go there for grovery
* I know every
See lessbut on weekends, I go there.
(As I told you before that I go there every week, I know about the entire place.)
I always go there for shopping
I go there for grovery
Paragraph on My Favourite place in the world
* I cannot gainsay the beauty of get attracted by these Juxtapose has been used incorrectly I go there for my summer retreats Good!
* I cannot gainsay the beauty of
get attracted by these
Juxtapose has been used incorrectly
I go there for my summer retreats
Good!
See lessShort paragraph on the importance of father in a person’s life
*he earns for his family he has vast experience of the world
*he earns for his family
See lesshe has vast experience of the world
Short paragraph on my favorite indoor activity
*as I believe that being (Do not put period before as)
*as I believe that being
(Do not put period before as)
See lessShort paragraph on the role my mother has played in my life
She is a woman who has had an overwhelming effect on my life.
She is a woman who has had an overwhelming effect on my life.
See lessShort paragraph on the role my mother has played in my life
Very good!
Very good!
See lessShort article on the importance of mother in a person’s life
*, and well-known affable She is an epitome of perfection and love
*, and
See lesswell-known
affable
She is an epitome of perfection and love
Short article on my favorite cousin
*We had lived and played to Now, decent When he comes on vacations, we go out
*We had lived and played to
See lessNow,
decent
When he comes on vacations, we go out
Some marketing techniques are unethical and have no place in today’s society.To what extent do you agree with this view?
TA: 6.0-7.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 LR: 7.0 CC:6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.5 *You cannot use as with but. People are getting greedier sexual-based stuff (Despite of this fact,what our media industry doing is shameful for us) This sentence needs to be written again. Tobacco has a detrimental effect on a person's healthRead more
TA: 6.0-7.0
GRA: 6.0-7.0
LR: 7.0
CC:6.0-7.0
Overall: 6.5
*You cannot use as with but.
See lessPeople are getting greedier
sexual-based stuff
(Despite of this fact,what our media industry doing is shameful for us) This sentence needs to be written again.
Tobacco has a detrimental effect on a person’s health
The government should devise a plan to take stern action against those who are promoting unethical marketing practices.
The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. school should cut subjects such as arts and physical education out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subjects which will be more useful later in life, such as information technology and maths. to what extent do you agree?
Very good effort!
Very good effort!
See lessThe role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. school should cut subjects such as arts and physical education out of the curriculum so that children can focus on subjects which will be more useful later in life, such as information technology and maths. to what extent do you agree?
TA: 8.0 CC:7.0 LR: 8.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 Overall: 7.0-7.5 * Boasting (Why was this word used?) Cannot be gainsaid helps individuals every student does not have on the student's personality development Later, it enables not only... but also open-air activities
TA: 8.0
CC:7.0
LR: 8.0
GRA: 6.0-7.0
Overall: 7.0-7.5
* Boasting (Why was this word used?)
See lessCannot be gainsaid
helps individuals
every student does not have
on the student’s personality development
Later, it enables
not only… but also
open-air activities
Nowadays,full time university students tends to focus on their studies. Some people think it is important to students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree r disagree?
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See lessIndividual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in.
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See lessForeign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
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See lessIn some schools and universities girls often select arts subjects, for instance, literature, and boys often choose science subjects, such as, physics. Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?
Very good effort!
Very good effort!
See lessIn some schools and universities girls often select arts subjects, for instance, literature, and boys often choose science subjects, such as, physics. Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed?
TA:7.0-8.0 GRA:7.0 LR:7.0 CC:7.0 Overall:7.0-7.5 * Please look at this sentence. I think it needs to be written again. (it can be changed only partially because we can societal outlook towards a particular profession or stream.)
TA:7.0-8.0
GRA:7.0
LR:7.0
CC:7.0
Overall:7.0-7.5
* Please look at this sentence. I think it needs to be written again. (it can be changed only partially because we can societal outlook towards a particular profession or stream.)
See lessndividual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in.
TA: 6.0 GRA:5.0-6.0 CC:6.0 LR:6.0 Overall: 5.5 * Modern generation is busier This sentence is an incomplete sentence complex sentence (Even though they have greed of earning money and become more rich than other.) Traditions of our ancestors are being forgotten on a child's life Everyone has becomeRead more
TA: 6.0
GRA:5.0-6.0
CC:6.0
LR:6.0
Overall: 5.5
* Modern generation is busier
See lessThis sentence is an incomplete sentence complex sentence
(Even though they have greed of earning money and become more rich than other.)
Traditions of our ancestors are being forgotten
on a child’s life
Everyone has become selfish
To earn money
Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion
TA:4.0 GRA:5.0 LR:6.0 CC:6.0 Overall: 5.0- * foreign visitors want to than is charged from people they often want to many tourists spent around 200 million To recapitulate, I think (This essay was not on the topic) The topic required you to talk about foreign tourists rather than on overseas PakistaRead more
TA:4.0
GRA:5.0
LR:6.0
CC:6.0
Overall: 5.0-
* foreign visitors want to
than is charged from people
they often want to
many tourists spent
around 200 million
To recapitulate, I think
(This essay was not on the topic)
See lessThe topic required you to talk about foreign tourists rather than on overseas Pakistanis.
Nowadays,full time university students tends to focus on their studies. Some people think it is important to students to be involved in other activities. To what extent do you agree r disagree?
TA:4.0-5.0 LR: 6.0 GRA: 6.9 CC: 5.0 Overall:5.0 You could have easily achieved 6.5 if you would have written more than 250 words. * I totally agree Please watch the lectures I have made on facebook. The page is "pacans education" You will have to present, extend and support your idea. The ideas areRead more
TA:4.0-5.0
LR: 6.0
GRA: 6.9
CC: 5.0
Overall:5.0
You could have easily achieved 6.5 if you would have written more than 250 words.
* I totally agree
Please watch the lectures I have made on facebook. The page is “pacans education”
You will have to present, extend and support your idea. The ideas are not being developed. Moreover, you are required to write more than 250 words.
See lessSkin whitening products should be banned from being sold as they have no place in a free and fair society.To what extend do you agree with this statement?
TA: 7.0 GRA:5.0-6.0 LR: 6.0-7.0 CC:6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.0- *Nowadays, people are concerned about I disagree with this point are very much concerned women look younger In today's era, mundane lives who are we to band these products we should ban the These chemicals can be harmful that are being used woRead more
TA: 7.0
GRA:5.0-6.0
LR: 6.0-7.0
CC:6.0-7.0
Overall: 6.0-
*Nowadays,
See lesspeople are concerned about
I disagree with this point
are very much concerned
women look younger
In today’s era,
mundane lives
who are we to band these products
we should ban the
These chemicals can be harmful
that are being used worldwide
These days people life expectancy is much higher,consequently there is increasing concern about how and who cares for the elderly. Do you think it is the responsibility of the family to care for their elderly members,or should the government be held responsible?
TA: 7.0-8.0 CC:7.0 GRA:6.0 LR:6.0-7.0 Overall:6.5 *A family believed that it was its core responsibility to take of elders. As time is passing, we are becoming more advanced we were dependent upon them they put all their efforts to nurture us (You have to remove the comma after since) recently publiRead more
TA: 7.0-8.0
CC:7.0
GRA:6.0
LR:6.0-7.0
Overall:6.5
*A family believed that it was its core responsibility to take of elders.
As time is passing, we are becoming more advanced
we were dependent upon them
they put all their efforts to nurture us
(You have to remove the comma after since)
recently published in their
it is observed
are more skeptical and at the same time
You have to improve this statement
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Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
* so that you could be adept in your relevant field that by being an adult You will use moreover instead of "on the other hand" "In conclusion, I would like to say that," You have to remove comma which comes after that TA:6.0-7.0 CC:7.0 LR:6.0-7.0 GRA:6.0-7.0 Overall:6.5 You should have given a cleaRead more
* so that you could be adept in your relevant field
that by being an adult
You will use moreover instead of “on the other hand”
“In conclusion, I would like to say that,”
You have to remove comma which comes after that
TA:6.0-7.0
CC:7.0
LR:6.0-7.0
GRA:6.0-7.0
Overall:6.5
You should have given a clear position. Your ideas were good, but for the second paragraph, you should have given an example.
See lessEarning less money and having more free time is better than having more money and less free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
* some people think most of the people assume that Those type of people Money is important, but one cannot gainsay the importance of time (Please put examples to take your band up) TA: 6.0-7.0 CC: 6.0 LR: 7.0 GRA:6.0 Overall: 6.0-6.5
* some people think
most of the people assume that
Those type of people
Money is important, but one cannot gainsay the importance of time
(Please put examples to take your band up)
TA: 6.0-7.0
See lessCC: 6.0
LR: 7.0
GRA:6.0
Overall: 6.0-6.5
In some countries a small number of people receive extremely high salaries. Some people believe this is a benefit for a country while others think that the government should regulate salaries that people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
* In my opinion, Because, if all the people are getting the same salary regardless the effort they put in their work, then this will demoralize those who work harder Although, TA:7.0 CC: 6.0-7.0 GRA: 6.0 LR: 7.0 Overall: 6.5
* In my opinion,
Because, if all the people are getting the same salary regardless the effort they put in their work, then this will demoralize those who work harder
Although,
TA:7.0
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GRA: 6.0
LR: 7.0
Overall: 6.5
Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects to acquire more knowledge, while other people believe they should learn a small number of subjects in details. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
TA:7.0 CC:7.0 GRA:7.0 LR:8.0 Overall: 7.0 You need to write a better introduction. Moreover, the example should be coupled with the main point.
TA:7.0
CC:7.0
GRA:7.0
LR:8.0
Overall: 7.0
You need to write a better introduction. Moreover, the example should be coupled with the main point.
See lessTourism continuous increase around the world. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism on both the individuals and society?
* tourism is increasing is dramatically when a punch of tourists came across the country it brings in money. The income generated through tourism can make a significant proportion in the national income. You need to develop your ideas and also support it with examples TA: 5.0-6.0 GRA: 6.0-7.0 LR: 6.Read more
* tourism is increasing is dramatically
when a punch of tourists came across the country it brings in money. The income generated through tourism can make a significant proportion in the national income.
You need to develop your ideas and also support it with examples
TA: 5.0-6.0
See lessGRA: 6.0-7.0
LR: 6.0
CC: 6.0
OverallL 5.5-6.0
Banning cars from city centers would be an efficient way to improve congestion and traffic flow. Whereas other people feel that this is an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
* You will have to watch the video related to CC and TA You have to put one main idea for each paragraph, but you have put 3 to 4 ideas for each paragraph. You will have to write this essay again ad they would be requiring you to develop your ideas. TA:5.0-6.0 GRA: 7.0 CC: 6.0 LR: 7.0 Overall: 6.0
* You will have to watch the video related to CC and TA
You have to put one main idea for each paragraph, but you have put 3 to 4 ideas for each paragraph.
You will have to write this essay again ad they would be requiring you to develop your ideas.
TA:5.0-6.0
See lessGRA: 7.0
CC: 6.0
LR: 7.0
Overall: 6.0
Many children today are exposed to violent videogames and TV programmes. How harmful is this? What can be done to fight this problem?
* war-related ,so that they can Many of the parents ignore that despite of many benefits and charms, modern technology has its drawbacks as well. May parents ignore the fact that although it might provide some benefits, it has some drawbacks too.
* war-related
,so that they can
Many of the parents ignore that despite of many benefits and charms, modern technology has its drawbacks as well.
May parents ignore the fact that although it might provide some benefits, it has some drawbacks too.
See lessTechnological devices weakening family relationships
* One needs his or her loved one every individual is attracted to his or her is in their own room, chatting and messaging online among family members via their technological devices. Nowadays, They show apathy towards those who are close to them Consequently, they spend less time with their members,Read more
* One needs his or her loved one
every individual is attracted to his or her
is in their own room, chatting and messaging online among family members via their technological devices.
Nowadays,
They show apathy towards those who are close to them
Consequently, they spend less time with their members, which results in weaker relationships.
Be more sociable and
You need to
TA: 6.0
GRA: 7.0
CC: 6.0
LR: 6.0-7.0
Overall: 6.5
I would talk to you regarding the format of the essay.
See lessMany believe that modern inventions have brought more negatives than positives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
* ,which can make Your essay is a very good one, but there is a serious problem pertaining to paragraphing, coherence, and development of ideas. You could have easily achieved 7.0 to 7.5 Please watch the latest video on pacans education related to writing task 2 in which this concept has been explaiRead more
* ,which can make
Your essay is a very good one, but there is a serious problem pertaining to paragraphing, coherence, and development of ideas. You could have easily achieved 7.0 to 7.5
Please watch the latest video on pacans education related to writing task 2 in which this concept has been explained.
TA: 6.0
See lessGRA: 7.0
CC-6.0
LR: 7.0-8.0
Overall: 6.5
Many university students do part-time work while studying at university. Is this a positive or negative development?
* ,so they have to You need to remove comma after although ,so that they could and so does the interest in studies ,but TA:8.0 GRA: 7.0 CC-7.9 LR:7.0 Overall: 7.0 A very good attempt
* ,so they have to
You need to remove comma after although
,so that they could
and so does the interest in studies
,but
TA:8.0
GRA: 7.0
CC-7.9
LR:7.0
Overall: 7.0
A very good attempt
See lessHuman activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans can’t stop damaging the planet whereas other believes that we can alter our behavior and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
You need to give examples to support your main idea. That is how your band would improve.
You need to give examples to support your main idea. That is how your band would improve.
See lessHuman activity has damaged the environment all around the world. Some people think that humans can’t stop damaging the planet whereas other believes that we can alter our behavior and prevent future damage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion
* ,and the measures Do not put comma after even though Do not use even though with but (As the human population grows, so is the waste produced by us, which contaminates the earth and pollutes our rivers and seas.) TA:7.0 GRA:7.0 CC:6.0-7.0 LR: 6.0-7.0 Overall: 6.5
* ,and the measures
Do not put comma after even though
Do not use even though with but
(As the human population grows, so is the waste produced by us, which contaminates the earth and pollutes our rivers and seas.)
TA:7.0
See lessGRA:7.0
CC:6.0-7.0
LR: 6.0-7.0
Overall: 6.5
Sometimes company sponsor sports events in order to advertise themselves and some people think that is oaky, while others think there are disadvantages to this. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
* is considered one of the most important parts Some say manifold benefits On the one hand, some people claim they can tell us about Nike they have advertisements to Moreover, From my point of view, To make people aware of TA:6-7 GRA:6 LR:6 CC:6 Overall: 6.0
* is considered one of the most important parts
Some say
manifold benefits
On the one hand,
some people claim
they can tell us about
Nike
they have advertisements to
Moreover,
From my point of view,
To make people aware of
TA:6-7
See lessGRA:6
LR:6
CC:6
Overall: 6.0
Libraries should concentrate on improving their technological resources rather than purchasing a wider selection of books
* have always been known for ,so that the books (service providing the information on online websites licenses us and it we don’t actually see i) TA:8 GRA:7 LR:7.0-8:0 CC: 7.0 Overall: 7.5 It was a very well-written essay, but it was a bit too long. Did you complete it in 40 minutes?
* have always been known for
,so that the books
(service providing the information on online websites licenses us and it we don’t actually see i)
TA:8
GRA:7
LR:7.0-8:0
CC: 7.0
Overall: 7.5
It was a very well-written essay, but it was a bit too long. Did you complete it in 40 minutes?
See lessWe have three important parts of education reading, writing and Math. Some people think every child will benefit from a fourth skill added to the list: computer skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
ever-changing but has also ,which consequently In 2018, the study by MIT reported that TA:6-7 CC:6 LR:7-8 GRA:7 Overall: 6.5 to 7.0 Comments: Linking devices, complex sentences are missing. The conclusion is also missing.
ever-changing
but has also
,which consequently
In 2018, the study by MIT reported that
TA:6-7
CC:6
LR:7-8
GRA:7
Overall: 6.5 to 7.0
Comments: Linking devices, complex sentences are missing.
See lessThe conclusion is also missing.
Billions of dollars are being wasted each year on space research. The money could be better used to improve conditions on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
* being squandered could be used to ameliorate the conditions of people belief is true dreams to their own territories it failed in its plans This essay is having many mistakes. It would be at 5.0 to 5.5
* being squandered
could be used to ameliorate the conditions of people
belief is true
dreams to
their own territories
it failed in its plans
This essay is having many mistakes. It would be at 5.0 to 5.5
See lessSome people believe that in 100 years time life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?
Dearth or Paucity Catastrophes
Dearth or Paucity
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8/10
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