Dear Sana, In your writing style you keep on repeating the same idea time and again .Please avoid repeating the statement.You don't need to tell the reader again and again the same reason.Furthermore ,you wrote "because are dying due to lack of food" but who ?linking words are not frequently used .
Dear Sana,
In your writing style you keep on repeating the same idea time and again .Please avoid repeating the statement.You don’t need to tell the reader again and again the same reason.Furthermore ,you wrote “because are dying due to lack of food” but who ?linking words are not frequently used .
Dear Sana, Your ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g \"for instance\"
Dear Sana,
Your ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g \”for instance\”
Dear Sana, Your ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g "for instance"
Dear Sana,
Your ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g “for instance”
Billions of dollars are being wasted each year on space research. The money could be better used to improve conditions on earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Dear Sana, In your writing style you keep on repeating the same idea time and again .Please avoid repeating the statement.You don't need to tell the reader again and again the same reason.Furthermore ,you wrote "because are dying due to lack of food" but who ?linking words are not frequently used .
Dear Sana,
See lessIn your writing style you keep on repeating the same idea time and again .Please avoid repeating the statement.You don’t need to tell the reader again and again the same reason.Furthermore ,you wrote “because are dying due to lack of food” but who ?linking words are not frequently used .
Some people believe that in 100 years time life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?
Dear Sana, Your ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g \"for instance\"
Dear Sana,
See lessYour ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g \”for instance\”
Some people believe that in 100 years time life will be easier for the majority of people, while others are unsure about this. What is your opinion?
Dear Sana, Your ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g "for instance"
Dear Sana,
See lessYour ideas are great ,however ,I believe you need to work on the range of your your sentences,they could have been written in a better way.Furthermore,your essay contains words which are being repeated time and again e.g “for instance”