8/10 There were some mistakes but overall a good effort is resulting in an escalation in the crime rate cheap material is being shared we have to take precautions
8/10
There were some mistakes but overall a good effort
is resulting in an escalation in the crime rate
cheap material is being shared
we have to take precautions
excellent work Ms Qandeel! " the following improvements have been made" her friends compelled her he concealed the shareholders dinosaurs are extinct now
excellent work Ms Qandeel!
” the following improvements have been made”
her friends compelled her
he concealed the shareholders
dinosaurs are extinct now
Badminton
7/10 *daily basis *wants to be
7/10
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*wants to be
sports
9/10 this is for your stamina!!!
9/10
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Faviorte dress
please work on your spelling............
please work on your spelling…………
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7/10 good
7/10
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Motorway
7/10 some mistakes, but overall really good!
7/10
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Diamonds
8/10
8/10
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8.5/10
8.5/10
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8/10 *through
8/10
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Inflation
8/10 Good *one of the major problems
8/10
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*one of the major problems
Democracy
7.5/10 some grammatical mistakes
7.5/10
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Electricity – A major problem
9.5/10
9.5/10
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9/10 good
9/10
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Child labor
8.5/10 your efforts are commendable!
8.5/10
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Independence – A gift from ALLAH
9/10 sentence structure is very good!
9/10
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Computer – A great invention
8/10 good!
8/10
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Expectations
9.5/10
9.5/10
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7.5/10 good effort but you need to see for the unnecessary mistakes you are making
7.5/10
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Why we are not honest
6/10 honest people no one even bothers
6/10
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no one even bothers
Fall of Pakistani hockey
9/10 best written paragraph of the day!
9/10
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Branded garment’s
6/10 branded garments are the one which are advertised in a manner that people seek to buy them or be associated to them.
6/10
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problems in Pakistan
8.5/10 excellent
8.5/10
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how we earn wealth by Islamic law’s..?
6.5/10 some words are used incorrectly, but I am impressed by your writing and dedication. Just try to proofread more
6.5/10
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Natural Lighting. …
8/10 very good!
8/10
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History maker person….
7.5/10 excellent effort! * if we read the history
7.5/10
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* if we read the history
Horrible bosses
6.5/10 * Boss is always right * when one asks
6.5/10
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* when one asks
Internet – Merits and demerits
7/10 well written
7/10
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Can new technology help students
7/10 *plays an integral role
7/10
*plays an integral role
See lessWhy people go to university
6/10 Good work! *people *get good degree *safeguard our future *admission
6/10 Good work!
*people
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*safeguard our future
*admission
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and things done. other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace.
7/10 Good essay
7/10
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Fiction Books or Movies?
9/10 such well written, I am impressed Good job Ms Nida!
9/10
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Crown Prince Dan of Yan
8/10 good effort
8/10
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Zhuangxiang
8/10 I am impressed by your ability to read and comprehend such difficult piece of writing daughter named
8/10
I am impressed by your ability to read and comprehend such difficult piece of writing
daughter
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what is Yong?
7/10 very good effort but there are few grammatical mistakes can be used
7/10
very good effort but there are few grammatical mistakes
can be used
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7/10 I am impressed by your research and the alacrity to learn new words
7/10
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Records of Great Historian
8.5/10 very good
8.5/10
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Handan
7/10 very informative!
7/10
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Son of Heaven
9/10 this is what I am looking for it. Good research and written in the best possible way
9/10
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Confucian Society
8/10 some grammatical mistakes but overall very good effort! *mainly concerned with
8/10
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*mainly concerned with
Lute Player
8/10 Good
8/10
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Warring States period
7/10 excellent work!
7/10
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Ancient China
6/10 It is good to see that you mentioned Great Wall of China. Did you know that Emperor Qin started it?
6/10
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Clans
7/10 very good effort Ms. Uzma!!!
7/10
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sima
5/10 short,but informative. Try to write down 30 to 40 words
5/10
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People have different ways of escaping stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read, some exercise, other work in their gardens. What do you think are the best way.
8/10 good job!
8/10
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CAN NEW technologies HELP STUDENTS
23/30 Grammar mistakes are coming
23/30
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WHAT CHARACTERISTIC PEOPLE MAKE SUCCESSFUL
21/30 There were many grammatical mistakes they are honest they work painstakingly
21/30
There were many grammatical mistakes
they are honest
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Online Messengers: Drawbacks of FACEBOOK
8/10 There were some mistakes but overall a good effort is resulting in an escalation in the crime rate cheap material is being shared we have to take precautions
8/10
There were some mistakes but overall a good effort
is resulting in an escalation in the crime rate
See lesscheap material is being shared
we have to take precautions
Sentences.
excellent work Ms Qandeel! " the following improvements have been made" her friends compelled her he concealed the shareholders dinosaurs are extinct now
excellent work Ms Qandeel!
” the following improvements have been made”
her friends compelled her
See lesshe concealed the shareholders
dinosaurs are extinct now
My last day at School
6/10 12 years have completed today school has no rules teachers have arranged * there are many grammatical mistakes
6/10
12 years have completed
today school has no rules
teachers have arranged
* there are many grammatical mistakes
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3/10 living in one house
3/10
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