10/10 Band 7.5 seriously really good work! I am checking after 7 days and I can say one thing that there has been a drastic improvement in your writing.
10/10 Band 7.5 seriously really good work!
I am checking after 7 days and I can say one thing that there has been a drastic improvement in your writing.
Who wants to destroy the state?
10/10 Band 7.5 seriously really good work! I am checking after 7 days and I can say one thing that there has been a drastic improvement in your writing.
10/10 Band 7.5 seriously really good work!
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Austria
10/10 I am really impressed.
10/10
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Austria and France
10/10 best description ever
10/10
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Boredom
10/10 excellent!
10/10
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Air jet
8.5/10 I liked this one!
8.5/10
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fortune 500
9/10
9/10
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8/10 very informative!
8/10
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voluntary groups
9/10
9/10
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8/10
8/10
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4/10
4/10
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6.5/10 well-written article, but short
6.5/10
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Why is math so difficult?
7/10
7/10
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6/10
6/10
See lesscoca cola
7/10
7/10
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8/10
8/10
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6/5/10 good
6/5/10
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Why does coca cola spend so much on marketing?
10/10 I loved the humor!!!! spends so much
10/10
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spends so much
What makes you happy?
5/10 make me and makes me happy These are used incorrectly
5/10
make me
and makes me happy
These are used incorrectly
See lessA story to tell
6/10
6/10
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10/10 this is real content
10/10
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Over work
9/10
9/10
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9/10 it is an honor to have a student like you as you always do your work
9/10
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Recognition from bosses
8.5/10 candidness and truthfulness in your article
8.5/10
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Reason for their Happiness
8.5/10 does not mean
8.5/10
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Main challenge
9/10 this deserves to be in a newspaper
9/10
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Voluntary groups
7/10 needy people
7/10
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viber
3/10 Many mistakes, but your effort is appreciated viber is used Mostly people use when we want to talk to a person in a foreign country
3/10
See lessMany mistakes, but your effort is appreciated
viber is used
Mostly people use
when we want to talk to a person in a foreign country
Psychology
9.5/10 I cannot believe you are writing these
9.5/10
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Global competition
9/10
9/10
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9.5/10 excellent
9.5/10
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Most Important Thing in Life
6.5/10 do not = does not " we will do care" is wrong
6.5/10
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” we will do care” is wrong
Puppy adoption
8/10 Good
8/10
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Wonderful Pistachio
7/10 Good effort, but too short
7/10
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Parole
4/10 too short
4/10
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Coffee
8/10
8/10
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7/10
7/10
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8/10 good
8/10
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exile or death
9/10
9/10
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4/10 We will discuss some issues in the class. They are very serious they know nothing they love animals
4/10
We will discuss some issues in the class. They are very serious
they know nothing
See lessthey love animals
What makes you strong
4/10 many mistakes and I have provided you some of them my determination was to go abroad. Now I have achieved my goals I will do PHD
4/10
many mistakes and I have provided you some of them
my determination was to go abroad.
See lessNow I have achieved my goals
I will do PHD
KIA 900
I think I have checked it before
I think I have checked it before
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4/10 research more about testimonial
4/10
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Opinions
1/10 why so short? write more than 50 words
1/10
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write more than 50 words
Attraction
6/10 good
6/10
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Best government in the world
3/10 they are working in their country they work with a sharp mind TOO MANY MISTAKES
3/10
they are working
in their country
they work with a sharp mind
TOO MANY MISTAKES
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4.5/10 commendable!
4.5/10
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Importance of gift
5/10 very nice effort, but there are some mistakes
5/10
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Jurassic park
2/10 toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo short!
2/10
See lesstoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo short!
Murder is a very bad thing
4/10 good but too short
4/10
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By Punishing Murderers with the death penality,socity is also guilty of committing murder,therefore life in prison is a better punishment for murderers
Band 6.5 few grammatical mistakes! We will discuss them in the class
Band 6.5
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We will discuss them in the class