Technology has proven itself in every aspect Not only in digital media, but also in educational sector will replace textbooks I accede with this statement If someone loses his or her data there is no way to recover the lost data notebooks should be brought into use at all levels of education 6/10
Technology has proven itself in every aspect
Not only in digital media, but also in educational sector
will replace textbooks
I accede with this statement
If someone loses his or her data
there is no way to recover the lost data
notebooks should be brought into use at all levels of education
* It is crucial to broach upon this matter The matter is related to students who fail in their classes Someone fails he or she does not was not interedted Write again! 4/10
* It is crucial to broach upon this matter
The matter is related to students who fail in their classes
Someone fails
he or she does not
was not interedted
* should wear uniforms Every institute has students emphasize If there would no uniform, impoverished students would feel humiliated. They would suffer due inferiority complex 5/10
* should wear uniforms
Every institute has
students emphasize
If there would no uniform, impoverished students would feel humiliated.
They would suffer due inferiority complex
* their families so it would not be justifiable to possess a phone I am also a student they deceive teachers by making them believe that they are working Very good. I am proud of you! 8/10
* their families
so it would not be justifiable to possess a phone
I am also a student
they deceive teachers by making them believe that they are working
* Imperative role others believe that children should be left as free birds Children feel more responsible by taking their own decisions Even if they make the wrong decisions, they would be face the adverse consequences with courage. Band 7
* Imperative role
others believe that children should be left as free birds
Children feel more responsible by taking their own decisions
Even if they make the wrong decisions, they would be face the adverse consequences with courage.
* me of its truthfulness one of the ways to reduce the fear of being punished the countries which fail to implement these stern rules may suffer due to terrorism
* me of its truthfulness
one of the ways to reduce
the fear of being punished
the countries which fail to implement these stern rules may suffer due to terrorism
* trend of using internet is proliferating I would like to share one of my own experiences It is my notion that free internet should be made available 6/10
* trend of using internet is proliferating
I would like to share one of my own experiences
It is my notion that free internet should be made available
* should pass a basic skills test First of all, they might have forgotten most of the concepts Secondly, It is necessary A test is the only way to ascertain where you are standing right now 4/10 Write again
* should pass a basic skills test
First of all, they might have forgotten most of the concepts
Secondly,
It is necessary
A test is the only way to ascertain where you are standing right now
* Students should not be paid for having good grades Getting rewarded for getting good grades is important, but financial rewards are not important When a student would get paid for higher marks, he or she will get greedy for money Money would make a person selfish 4/10 Write again
* Students should not be paid for having good grades
Getting rewarded for getting good grades is important, but financial rewards are not important
When a student would get paid for higher marks, he or she will get greedy for money
Money would make a person selfish
*full of fantasies and is considered a young age How could one determine voting for the wrong person will result in a loss for the nation A person should be mature enough to vote for someone
*full of fantasies
and is considered a young age
How could one determine
voting for the wrong person will result in a loss for the nation
A person should be mature enough to vote for someone
* where you spend A student would more likely give time to education, but exercise is also very important Getting good grades is more important than other achievements. 4/10 Write again
* where you spend
A student would more likely give time to education, but exercise is also very important
Getting good grades is more important than other achievements.
* but also helps a person to burnish his or her image It helps an individual to work American citizens should complete helps a person become professional builds professional morals 5/10
* but also helps a person to burnish his or her image
It helps an individual to work
American citizens should complete
helps a person become professional
builds professional morals
*Who does not It has been not be permitted It can distract According to my contention having imperative tool Can be helpful Give online assignments 4/10
*Who does not
It has been
not be permitted
It can distract
According to my contention having
imperative tool
Can be helpful
Give online assignments
* because should be with the previous sentence There are varying views about According to my notion, we should not pay money to college athletes. but what about other students but also represent College needs extra money its needs because they work assiduously So in my opinion Should not pay to payRead more
* because should be with the previous sentence
There are varying views about
According to my notion, we should not pay money to college athletes.
but what about other students
but also represent
College needs extra money its needs
because they work assiduously
So in my opinion
Should not pay to pay games
* Teachers ;moreover, having a phone might hamper their ability to disseminate knowledge Students might also feel the need to have a phone after looking at their teachers. Students would be deprived of a favorable learning environment 7/10
* Teachers
;moreover, having a phone might hamper their ability to disseminate knowledge
Students might also feel the need to have a phone after looking at their teachers.
Students would be deprived of a favorable learning environment
* discipline and unity sorts of uniforms whether a student belongs to a rich or poor family, he or she wears the same uniform he or she is supposed to obey the rules Having a uniform would lessen the financial burden on students. Have their own ideologies understand-fathom 6.5
* discipline and unity
sorts of uniforms
whether a student belongs to a rich or poor family, he or she wears the same uniform
he or she is supposed to obey the rules
Having a uniform would lessen the financial burden on students.
Have their own ideologies
understand-fathom
* older people Remove the sentence starting with however. It does not make sense. That is why we can work assiduously or tirelessly With every coming year our energies flag 6.5 to 7
* older people
Remove the sentence starting with however. It does not make sense.
That is why we can work assiduously or tirelessly
With every coming year our energies flag
* To what extent does the media? media plays Media is influencing our lives in a positive way related to scientific development Media could also have negative impact on our lives imparting information Media is harming the society negativity is emerging impacts on the people 8/10
* To what extent does the media?
media plays
Media is influencing our lives in a positive way
related to scientific development
Media could also have negative impact on our lives
imparting information
Media is harming the society
negativity is emerging
impacts on the people
4/10- There are many grammatical mistakes * argue that Some people consider it good to be educated Our country does not have ample resources both genders prohibit this trend they also get addicted I personally believe more disadvantages than advantages
4/10- There are many grammatical mistakes
* argue that
Some people consider it good to be educated
Our country does not have ample resources
both genders
prohibit this trend
they also get addicted
I personally believe
more disadvantages than advantages
Should students’ textbooks be replaced with notebook computers?
Technology has proven itself in every aspect Not only in digital media, but also in educational sector will replace textbooks I accede with this statement If someone loses his or her data there is no way to recover the lost data notebooks should be brought into use at all levels of education 6/10
Technology has proven itself in every aspect
Not only in digital media, but also in educational sector
will replace textbooks
I accede with this statement
If someone loses his or her data
there is no way to recover the lost data
notebooks should be brought into use at all levels of education
6/10
See lessShould students who fail their classes be retained and have to repeat the grade
* It is crucial to broach upon this matter The matter is related to students who fail in their classes Someone fails he or she does not was not interedted Write again! 4/10
* It is crucial to broach upon this matter
The matter is related to students who fail in their classes
Someone fails
he or she does not
was not interedted
Write again!
4/10
See lessshould students be allowed to use cell phones in elementary or high school
*Cell phones have become ubiquitous Everyone has a phone irrespective of the age group allow our children 6/10
*Cell phones have become ubiquitous
Everyone has a phone irrespective of the age group
allow our children
6/10
See lessShould students have to wear uniform ?
* should wear uniforms Every institute has students emphasize If there would no uniform, impoverished students would feel humiliated. They would suffer due inferiority complex 5/10
* should wear uniforms
Every institute has
students emphasize
If there would no uniform, impoverished students would feel humiliated.
They would suffer due inferiority complex
5/10
See lessShould students be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high schools ?
* their families so it would not be justifiable to possess a phone I am also a student they deceive teachers by making them believe that they are working Very good. I am proud of you! 8/10
* their families
so it would not be justifiable to possess a phone
I am also a student
they deceive teachers by making them believe that they are working
Very good. I am proud of you!
See less8/10
Should students text books be Replaced by Notebooks Computers?
* affect their grades on how to use 7/10
* affect their grades
on how to use
7/10
See lessIn some countries children have strict rules of behaviour, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything them want. To what extent should children have to follow rules.
* Imperative role others believe that children should be left as free birds Children feel more responsible by taking their own decisions Even if they make the wrong decisions, they would be face the adverse consequences with courage. Band 7
* Imperative role
others believe that children should be left as free birds
Children feel more responsible by taking their own decisions
Even if they make the wrong decisions, they would be face the adverse consequences with courage.
Band 7
See lessShould students have to pass a basic skills test to graduate high school?
* I firmly believe that a basic skills test would be taken A student should have some rudimentary knowledge about the subject Write again 2/10
* I firmly believe that a basic skills test would be taken
A student should have some rudimentary knowledge about the subject
Write again
2/10
See lessShould the death penalty be used to punish violent criminals
* me of its truthfulness one of the ways to reduce the fear of being punished the countries which fail to implement these stern rules may suffer due to terrorism
* me of its truthfulness
See lessone of the ways to reduce
the fear of being punished
the countries which fail to implement these stern rules may suffer due to terrorism
should schools raise money by selling candy and sugary soft drinks to students
* student gains diversified knowledge itself is selling detrimental to the health wants to raise there are manifold ways
* student gains diversified knowledge
See lessitself is selling
detrimental to the health
wants to raise
there are manifold ways
Should students who fail their classes be retained and have to repeat the grade
* there might be manifold reasons student's apathy towards the subject 6/10
* there might be manifold reasons
student’s apathy towards the subject
6/10
See lessshould students’ grades in gym affect their grade point averages?
Please write it again
Please write it again
See lessshould schools serve french-fries and fried potato products to students at lunch?
* I vehemently believe that schools should serve (What makes you believe that french fries are healthy?) 5/10
* I vehemently believe that schools should serve
(What makes you believe that french fries are healthy?)
5/10
See lessshould schools raise money by selling candy and sugary soft drinks to students?
*Schools make students do a lot of work It is my firm belief it can be used to make 7/10
*Schools make students do a lot of work
It is my firm belief
it can be used to make
7/10
See lessShould cities offer free public Wi-Fi
* trend of using internet is proliferating I would like to share one of my own experiences It is my notion that free internet should be made available 6/10
* trend of using internet is proliferating
I would like to share one of my own experiences
It is my notion that free internet should be made available
6/10
See lessShould students have to pass a basic skills test to graduate high school?
* should pass a basic skills test First of all, they might have forgotten most of the concepts Secondly, It is necessary A test is the only way to ascertain where you are standing right now 4/10 Write again
* should pass a basic skills test
First of all, they might have forgotten most of the concepts
Secondly,
It is necessary
A test is the only way to ascertain where you are standing right now
4/10
Write again
See lessshould students be paid for having good grades?
* Students should not be paid for having good grades Getting rewarded for getting good grades is important, but financial rewards are not important When a student would get paid for higher marks, he or she will get greedy for money Money would make a person selfish 4/10 Write again
* Students should not be paid for having good grades
Getting rewarded for getting good grades is important, but financial rewards are not important
When a student would get paid for higher marks, he or she will get greedy for money
Money would make a person selfish
4/10
See lessWrite again
Should the voting age be lowered to thirteen?
*full of fantasies and is considered a young age How could one determine voting for the wrong person will result in a loss for the nation A person should be mature enough to vote for someone
*full of fantasies
See lessand is considered a young age
How could one determine
voting for the wrong person will result in a loss for the nation
A person should be mature enough to vote for someone
Should students be required to take a foreign language course?
*For the last few decades, foreign language has been of great importance build 6/10
*For the last few decades,
foreign language has been of great importance
build
6/10
See lessshould students’ grades in gym affect their grade point averages?
* where you spend A student would more likely give time to education, but exercise is also very important Getting good grades is more important than other achievements. 4/10 Write again
* where you spend
A student would more likely give time to education, but exercise is also very important
Getting good grades is more important than other achievements.
4/10
See lessWrite again
State colleges be free to attend for in-state residents?
* as education is fundamental right 3/10 Write it again
* as education is fundamental right
3/10
Write it again
See lessShould all Americans citizens have to complete a year of community service?
* but also helps a person to burnish his or her image It helps an individual to work American citizens should complete helps a person become professional builds professional morals 5/10
* but also helps a person to burnish his or her image
It helps an individual to work
American citizens should complete
helps a person become professional
builds professional morals
5/10
See lessShould illegal immigrants be allowed to get drivers licenses?
I did not understand the other reason. * It should not be allowed to give them licences.
I did not understand the other reason.
See less* It should not be allowed to give them licences.
Pacans on should professional athletes have to take drug tests
* national representatives not only harm the athlete, but also tarnish the image of the country 7/10
* national representatives
not only harm the athlete, but also tarnish the image of the country
7/10
See lessstudent be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high school
*Who does not It has been not be permitted It can distract According to my contention having imperative tool Can be helpful Give online assignments 4/10
*Who does not
It has been
not be permitted
It can distract
According to my contention having
imperative tool
Can be helpful
Give online assignments
4/10
See lessShould college athletes be paid for playing?
* because should be with the previous sentence There are varying views about According to my notion, we should not pay money to college athletes. but what about other students but also represent College needs extra money its needs because they work assiduously So in my opinion Should not pay to payRead more
* because should be with the previous sentence
There are varying views about
According to my notion, we should not pay money to college athletes.
but what about other students
but also represent
College needs extra money its needs
because they work assiduously
So in my opinion
Should not pay to pay games
6/10
See lessShould students have to wear uniforms?
* should wear college lives in finding clothes Because of uniform, students would not be jealous add positivity in one's personality 6/10
* should wear
college lives
in finding
clothes
Because of uniform, students would not be jealous
add positivity in one’s personality
6/10
See lessshould the death penalty be used to punish violent criminals
* Avoid writing down run-on sentences should learn
* Avoid writing down run-on sentences
See lessshould learn
should professional athletes have to take drug tests
* their countries boost their energies must take drug tests nobody should use shortcuts to achieve greatness in life
* their countries
See lessboost their energies
must take drug tests
nobody should use shortcuts to achieve greatness in life
is it appropriate for students and teachers to be friends on Facebook
* In addition to this, teachers also remain in contact with their students. 7/10
* In addition to this, teachers also remain in contact with their students.
7/10
See lessshould unhealthy fast food products be sold with a warning label
* People consume fast food to follow celebrities that would be detrimental for a person's health 6/10
* People consume fast food to follow celebrities
that would be detrimental for a person’s health
6/10
See lessshould students learn about world religions in public school
* It would create tolerance in students. It will enable a student to show reverence to the religions of other students 6/10
* It would create tolerance in students.
It will enable a student to show reverence to the religions of other students
6/10
See lessshould students or teachers receive money for scoring well on standardized tests
* Students and teachers deserve monetary rewards it will encourage them to put a more meticulous effort 3/10
* Students and teachers deserve monetary rewards
it will encourage them to put a more meticulous effort
3/10
See lessshould teachers be allowed to having cell phones in classroom
* Teachers ;moreover, having a phone might hamper their ability to disseminate knowledge Students might also feel the need to have a phone after looking at their teachers. Students would be deprived of a favorable learning environment 7/10
* Teachers
;moreover, having a phone might hamper their ability to disseminate knowledge
Students might also feel the need to have a phone after looking at their teachers.
Students would be deprived of a favorable learning environment
7/10
See lessTopic: should students have to wear uniforms?
* discipline and unity sorts of uniforms whether a student belongs to a rich or poor family, he or she wears the same uniform he or she is supposed to obey the rules Having a uniform would lessen the financial burden on students. Have their own ideologies understand-fathom 6.5
* discipline and unity
sorts of uniforms
whether a student belongs to a rich or poor family, he or she wears the same uniform
he or she is supposed to obey the rules
Having a uniform would lessen the financial burden on students.
Have their own ideologies
understand-fathom
6.5
See lessshould alcohol manufacturers be allowed to advertise on television
;moreover, injurious-detrimental become addicted 8/10
;moreover,
injurious-detrimental
become addicted
8/10
See lessIn recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their. Is this a positive or a negative development?
* want to purchase they are more aware of these things These malls have all the commodities Small shops only sell local products Band 6 Much better
* want to purchase
they are more aware of these things
These malls have all the commodities
Small shops only sell local products
Band 6
See lessMuch better
Topic: should college athletes be paid for playing?
Expert-Adroit If they are paid, they might be derelict in their duties towards studies. Very good effort!
Expert-Adroit
If they are paid, they might be derelict in their duties towards studies.
Very good effort!
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as human. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies doing trail on innocent animals.
If we want to prevent human deaths we halt all such efforts which could harm the humans. Good!
If we want to prevent human deaths we halt all such efforts which could harm the humans.
See lessGood!
second essay on There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
* older people Remove the sentence starting with however. It does not make sense. That is why we can work assiduously or tirelessly With every coming year our energies flag 6.5 to 7
* older people
Remove the sentence starting with however. It does not make sense.
That is why we can work assiduously or tirelessly
With every coming year our energies flag
6.5 to 7
See lessAnimals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceutical companies from doing trials on innocent animals. Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
6.5 to 7.0 Please do not put If and then together
6.5 to 7.0
Please do not put If and then together
See lessThere is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
* Does not only depend 6.5 to 7.0 Please choose one point of view
* Does not only depend
6.5 to 7.0
Please choose one point of view
See lessIn your opinion, should young people choose their profession, or should their parents choose for them?
* they have lived their lives with unique experiences Band 6.5
* they have lived their lives with unique experiences
Band 6.5
See lessTo what extent do the media influence people’s social behaviour?
* To what extent does the media? media plays Media is influencing our lives in a positive way related to scientific development Media could also have negative impact on our lives imparting information Media is harming the society negativity is emerging impacts on the people 8/10
* To what extent does the media?
media plays
Media is influencing our lives in a positive way
related to scientific development
Media could also have negative impact on our lives
imparting information
Media is harming the society
negativity is emerging
impacts on the people
8/10
See lessThe Favorite Book
I have affinity for reading Book gives me everyone is busy kinds of books others like bible to Christians 7/10
I have affinity for reading
Book gives me
everyone is busy
kinds of books
others like
bible to Christians
7/10
See lessFavorite World Leader
* I would pick Imran Khan his fierce attitude a lot of good things have happened in Pakistan 7/10
* I would pick Imran Khan
his fierce attitude
a lot of good things have happened in Pakistan
7/10
See lessParagraph on father
* He worked tirelessly Very good paragraph. You have to write these in upper case.
* He worked tirelessly
Very good paragraph. You have to write these in upper case.
See lessNature’s Way Memo
3.5/6 We will discuss in class
3.5/6
We will discuss in class
See lessParagraph on parents
7/10 *Parents are the guardians Although they love me, they sometimes scold me My father always teachers me How to deal with every situation guides
7/10
See less*Parents are the guardians
Although they love me, they sometimes scold me
My father always teachers me
How to deal with every situation
guides
co education advantages and disadvantges discuss them in both views and give your own opinion.
4/10- There are many grammatical mistakes * argue that Some people consider it good to be educated Our country does not have ample resources both genders prohibit this trend they also get addicted I personally believe more disadvantages than advantages
4/10- There are many grammatical mistakes
* argue that
See lessSome people consider it good to be educated
Our country does not have ample resources
both genders
prohibit this trend
they also get addicted
I personally believe
more disadvantages than advantages