5/10 * Most of the times, people get into debt by buying things they do not need do not get satisfied or to impress it is human nature to feel more attracted towards a person has to control himself or herself They should not indulge themselves in They should feel satisfied
5/10
* Most of the times, people get into debt by buying things they do not need
do not get satisfied
or to impress
it is human nature to feel more attracted towards
a person has to control himself or herself
They should not indulge themselves in
They should feel satisfied
* You do not have to put they for people who you respect our grandfathers show them reverence When I was a child spent with my grandfather spent my entire day If I did a mistake
* You do not have to put they for people who you respect
our grandfathers
show them reverence
When I was a child
spent with my grandfather
spent my entire day
If I did a mistake
* It is a negative thought Jealousy can be a burden on a person's heart Siblings get jealous of the their siblings Poor-impoverished show-evince jealousy towards the academically strong students Please do not use the word good or bad student. There is no such thing as that. Students are academicallyRead more
* It is a negative thought
Jealousy can be a burden on a person’s heart
Siblings get jealous of the their siblings
Poor-impoverished
show-evince
jealousy towards the academically strong students
Please do not use the word good or bad student. There is no such thing as that. Students are academically strong or weak.
6/10 *Father loves me passionately and compassionately Whenever I want something he never snubs me I insisted He somehow managed who worked things we wanted time with him
6/10
*Father loves me passionately and compassionately
Whenever I want something he never snubs me
I insisted
He somehow managed
who worked
things we wanted
time with him
* is an essential need which is why people love to eat dishes gets open in the area Please write the following sentences again In fact a large portion of cuisine was brought up from this store, because there food menu was very good and they offer a variety of food so almost everyone can find somethiRead more
* is an essential need
which is why
people love to eat
dishes
gets open in the area
Please write the following sentences again
In fact a large portion of cuisine was brought up from this store, because there food menu was very good and they offer a variety of food so almost everyone can find something of their like at there
I came to know
greatly affected me
I used to have a lot of benefits from the store
they offered high-quality meals
I tried my best
has been up to the mark
4/10 Write it again. There were many grammatical mistakes * habit and they are contaminating the society It is indeed an arduous task to have compassion and empathy for people, but we need to have as a human being. I feel severe pain when I see the people electing corrupt politicians as their leaderRead more
4/10
Write it again. There were many grammatical mistakes
* habit and they are contaminating the society
It is indeed an arduous task to have compassion and empathy for people, but we need to have as a human being.
I feel severe pain when I see the people electing corrupt politicians as their leaders.
It is the bitter truth of my country that that a portion of our population is poor and illiterate. People lack the basic knowledge to understand or fathom corrupt people.
Who do not perform their duties
come into power
As a result of this, the people are deprived of the basic needs.
Good effort 7/10 * It is an Islamic It solely came into existence take their myriad activities I ( I would always be in upper case) is to offer people offer are set in accordance with the sun perform family members visit
Good effort 7/10
* It is an Islamic
It solely came into existence
take their
myriad activities
I ( I would always be in upper case)
is to offer
people offer
are set in accordance with the sun
perform
family members visit
Your essay should be more focused. It should start by answering the question. You should avoid deviating from the topic. The first 9-10 lines are deviating from the topic. Band 6.5
Your essay should be more focused. It should start by answering the question. You should avoid deviating from the topic.
The first 9-10 lines are deviating from the topic.
* to make a person realize he or she has done wrong used by friends that it is their right Every person has his or her own way of punishing others it could have adverse affects on the minds of children
* to make a person realize
he or she has done wrong
used by friends
that it is their right
Every person has his or her own way of punishing others
it could have adverse affects on the minds of children
* is one of the most serious issues Many young people are indulged in criminal activities as they need to play an imperative role in making children realize what is lawful and what is unlawful. 6/10 look at the grammatical mistakes
* is one of the most serious issues
Many young people are indulged in criminal activities
as they need to play an imperative role in making children realize what is lawful and what is unlawful.
* I have visited many malls which impressed me it is established by Nishat Group which is one of the biggest companies as well as Pakistani brands not only a mall, but also a 7-star hotel
* I have visited many malls
which impressed me
it is established by Nishat Group which is one of the biggest companies
as well as Pakistani brands
not only a mall, but also a 7-star hotel
* Weekend has a different meaning to everyone Which thinks Being an updated racer everyone tries There were many grammatical mistakes. I also did not understand whether you wanted to write down in past simple tense or present simple tense. 5/10
* Weekend has a different meaning to everyone
Which thinks
Being an updated racer
everyone tries
There were many grammatical mistakes. I also did not understand whether you wanted to write down in past simple tense or present simple tense.
* A woman The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph is ambiguous. Please rewrite it. exemplary 6.5 The ideas were not properly developed and you deviated from the topic.Write it again specifying explicitly how mothers could be better parents than fathers.
* A woman
The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph is ambiguous. Please rewrite it.
exemplary
6.5
The ideas were not properly developed and you deviated from the topic.Write it again specifying explicitly how mothers could be better parents than fathers.
* Every person has his or her unique identity If you are living in a society Different cultures have different occasions 8/10 There were some grammatical mistakes, but overall it was very good. Commendable effort!
* Every person has his or her unique identity
If you are living in a society
Different cultures have different occasions
8/10
There were some grammatical mistakes, but overall it was very good. Commendable effort!
*I am an introvert I communicate less with others There were many teachers who taught me because of his teaching methodology my relationship with him was very special Whenever I faced a problem, I always sought his help I was able to have a sound understanding of Chemistry due to him He was very corRead more
*I am an introvert
I communicate less with others
There were many teachers who taught me
because of his teaching methodology
my relationship with him was very special
Whenever I faced a problem, I always sought his help
I was able to have a sound understanding of Chemistry due to him
He was very cordial towards me
He always motivated me and actuated me
5/10
There were many grammatical mistakes, please write down the second draft in the comment box below. Try to learn from the mistakes.
* who has never done work in his or her life The job you do to earn money is work Every task which is productive in some manner can be considered as work Or we become lethargic The more active we are, the more productive we become 5/10 Please write it again the in the comment box. There were many grRead more
* who has never done work in his or her life
The job you do to earn money is work
Every task which is productive in some manner can be considered as work
Or we become lethargic
The more active we are, the more productive we become
5/10
Please write it again the in the comment box. There were many grammatical mistakes.
* But it has also tarnished its image in the world Surrounded by different places I am a love of nature No matter what happen it would also stay close to my heart
* But it has also tarnished its image in the world
Surrounded by different places
I am a love of nature
No matter what happen it would also stay close to my heart
some people get into debt by buying somethings which they dont need and cant afford
5/10 * Most of the times, people get into debt by buying things they do not need do not get satisfied or to impress it is human nature to feel more attracted towards a person has to control himself or herself They should not indulge themselves in They should feel satisfied
5/10
See less* Most of the times, people get into debt by buying things they do not need
do not get satisfied
or to impress
it is human nature to feel more attracted towards
a person has to control himself or herself
They should not indulge themselves in
They should feel satisfied
Paragraph on sister
* have always proved to be sincere companions Since early childhood I have a lot of memories where it is required
* have always proved to be sincere companions
See lessSince early childhood
I have a lot of memories
where it is required
Paragraph on mother
7/10 Very good * one of the greatest relationships which exists int he universe bears unlimited pain she does not even care for her own comfort
7/10
Very good
* one of the greatest relationships
See lesswhich exists int he universe
bears unlimited pain
she does not even care for her own comfort
Paragraph on grandfather
* You do not have to put they for people who you respect our grandfathers show them reverence When I was a child spent with my grandfather spent my entire day If I did a mistake
* You do not have to put they for people who you respect
See lessour grandfathers
show them reverence
When I was a child
spent with my grandfather
spent my entire day
If I did a mistake
Paragraph on jealousy
* It is a negative thought Jealousy can be a burden on a person's heart Siblings get jealous of the their siblings Poor-impoverished show-evince jealousy towards the academically strong students Please do not use the word good or bad student. There is no such thing as that. Students are academicallyRead more
* It is a negative thought
Jealousy can be a burden on a person’s heart
Siblings get jealous of the their siblings
Poor-impoverished
show-evince
jealousy towards the academically strong students
Please do not use the word good or bad student. There is no such thing as that. Students are academically strong or weak.
See lessHappiness is considered very important in life Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Band 7 * as everyone endeavors to achieve it ways to achieve Human nature defines
Band 7
* as everyone endeavors to achieve it
See lessways to achieve
Human nature defines
Paragraph on father
6/10 *Father loves me passionately and compassionately Whenever I want something he never snubs me I insisted He somehow managed who worked things we wanted time with him
6/10
*Father loves me passionately and compassionately
See lessWhenever I want something he never snubs me
I insisted
He somehow managed
who worked
things we wanted
time with him
Paragraph on brother
* He provides a person with shelter and supports us whenever three brothers our problems and do shopping it is fun to hangout with them and spend time
* He provides a person with shelter
See lessand supports us whenever
three brothers
our problems
and do shopping
it is fun to hangout with them and spend time
Essay on A food store in your country suddenly closed and caused great trouble
* is an essential need which is why people love to eat dishes gets open in the area Please write the following sentences again In fact a large portion of cuisine was brought up from this store, because there food menu was very good and they offer a variety of food so almost everyone can find somethiRead more
* is an essential need
which is why
people love to eat
dishes
gets open in the area
Please write the following sentences again
In fact a large portion of cuisine was brought up from this store, because there food menu was very good and they offer a variety of food so almost everyone can find something of their like at there
I came to know
See lessgreatly affected me
I used to have a lot of benefits from the store
they offered high-quality meals
I tried my best
has been up to the mark
Essay on Act of selfishness that caused unhappiness
4/10 Write it again. There were many grammatical mistakes * habit and they are contaminating the society It is indeed an arduous task to have compassion and empathy for people, but we need to have as a human being. I feel severe pain when I see the people electing corrupt politicians as their leaderRead more
4/10
Write it again. There were many grammatical mistakes
* habit and they are contaminating the society
It is indeed an arduous task to have compassion and empathy for people, but we need to have as a human being.
I feel severe pain when I see the people electing corrupt politicians as their leaders.
It is the bitter truth of my country that that a portion of our population is poor and illiterate. People lack the basic knowledge to understand or fathom corrupt people.
Who do not perform their duties
come into power
As a result of this, the people are deprived of the basic needs.
See lessEssay on Describe the activities of religious people in your country
Good effort 7/10 * It is an Islamic It solely came into existence take their myriad activities I ( I would always be in upper case) is to offer people offer are set in accordance with the sun perform family members visit
Good effort 7/10
See less* It is an Islamic
It solely came into existence
take their
myriad activities
I ( I would always be in upper case)
is to offer
people offer
are set in accordance with the sun
perform
family members visit
Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little esposure to the natural world
Band 7.5
Band 7.5
See lessIn most countries, multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important. This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Band 7 Very good!
Band 7
See lessVery good!
In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment? Give reasons for your answer.
Band 7.5 Very good!
Band 7.5
See lessVery good!
Deciding the size of one’s own family is a personal preference In your opinion should government intervene in the rights of the individual with regard to family planning?
Your essay should be more focused. It should start by answering the question. You should avoid deviating from the topic. The first 9-10 lines are deviating from the topic. Band 6.5
Your essay should be more focused. It should start by answering the question. You should avoid deviating from the topic.
The first 9-10 lines are deviating from the topic.
Band 6.5
See lessAre Managers Powerful or Helpless?
8/10 Good
8/10
See lessGood
Essay on Punishment
* to make a person realize he or she has done wrong used by friends that it is their right Every person has his or her own way of punishing others it could have adverse affects on the minds of children
* to make a person realize
See lesshe or she has done wrong
used by friends
that it is their right
Every person has his or her own way of punishing others
it could have adverse affects on the minds of children
Essay on Crime
*Crime is considered as a menace in our society. but we forget to think abate crime rate 8/10
*Crime is considered as a menace in our society.
but we forget to think
abate crime rate
8/10
See lessEssay on Art
8/10 Good!
8/10
See lessGood!
Essay on Culture
9/10 Very good!
9/10
See lessVery good!
Essay on Money
* depends on money improves It became ubiquitous over the time everyone wants dearth of resources 7/10 Much better!
* depends on money
improves
It became ubiquitous over the time
everyone wants
dearth of resources
7/10
See lessMuch better!
Essay on crime
* is one of the most serious issues Many young people are indulged in criminal activities as they need to play an imperative role in making children realize what is lawful and what is unlawful. 6/10 look at the grammatical mistakes
* is one of the most serious issues
Many young people are indulged in criminal activities
as they need to play an imperative role in making children realize what is lawful and what is unlawful.
6/10
look at the grammatical mistakes
See lessFavorite mall
9/10 Excellent article!
9/10
See lessExcellent article!
Favorite mall
* I have visited many malls which impressed me it is established by Nishat Group which is one of the biggest companies as well as Pakistani brands not only a mall, but also a 7-star hotel
* I have visited many malls
See lesswhich impressed me
it is established by Nishat Group which is one of the biggest companies
as well as Pakistani brands
not only a mall, but also a 7-star hotel
Favorite Channel
* I am an introvert I have spare time I watch I recall my childhood In which Tom always tried to which I can say is my favorite
* I am an introvert
See lessI have spare time
I watch
I recall my childhood
In which Tom always tried to
which I can say is my favorite
Essay on Technology
I did not understand the first line. Please write it down again with clarity in the comment box. Proofread this 7/10
I did not understand the first line.
Please write it down again with clarity in the comment box.
Proofread this
7/10
See lessEssay on Family and Children
What is the meaning of brainstorming their child? * should help their children do what the children want to do their children's dreams 8/10
What is the meaning of brainstorming their child?
* should help their children do what the children want to do
their children’s dreams
8/10
See lessFavorite Town
* I will describe 7/10
* I will describe
See less7/10
Health
* Weekend has a different meaning to everyone Which thinks Being an updated racer everyone tries There were many grammatical mistakes. I also did not understand whether you wanted to write down in past simple tense or present simple tense. 5/10
* Weekend has a different meaning to everyone
Which thinks
Being an updated racer
everyone tries
There were many grammatical mistakes. I also did not understand whether you wanted to write down in past simple tense or present simple tense.
5/10
See lessOur Society, Our Responsibility
* were talking I got A very awe-inspiring story!
* were talking
I got
A very awe-inspiring story!
See lessMy favorite Cricket player
( You have to put past simple tense for these which have already happened) * He started his career in 1993 Very good article 8/10
( You have to put past simple tense for these which have already happened)
* He started his career in 1993
Very good article
See less8/10
Essay on Favorite number
* one of the reaons Very interesting article! 8/10
* one of the reaons
Very interesting article!
See less8/10
Favorite City
* is that it is beautiful 7/10 Good effort!
* is that it is beautiful
7/10
Good effort!
See lessMy Favorite Soccer player
*one of the best games It entails many good players and his way of playing He was born in 7/10
*one of the best games
It entails
many good players
and his way of playing
He was born in
7/10
See less4.The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far overweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
Band 7.5 Excellent effort! Keep it up
Band 7.5
See lessExcellent effort!
Keep it up
different culture in pak
ok. 5/10 Please write the paragraph professionally. This seems to be an e-mail written to a friend. Write it again.
ok.
See less5/10
Please write the paragraph professionally. This seems to be an e-mail written to a friend.
Write it again.
Women are always better parents than men. How far ypu agree with this? Give your opinion in not less than 250 words.
* A woman The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph is ambiguous. Please rewrite it. exemplary 6.5 The ideas were not properly developed and you deviated from the topic.Write it again specifying explicitly how mothers could be better parents than fathers.
* A woman
The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph is ambiguous. Please rewrite it.
exemplary
6.5
See lessThe ideas were not properly developed and you deviated from the topic.Write it again specifying explicitly how mothers could be better parents than fathers.
Essay on Money
* In the beginning pepper system was introduced 8/10
* In the beginning
pepper system was introduced
8/10
See lessEssay on Business
* We would not use amount with people 9/10
* We would not use amount with people
9/10
See lessEssay on Culture
* Every person has his or her unique identity If you are living in a society Different cultures have different occasions 8/10 There were some grammatical mistakes, but overall it was very good. Commendable effort!
* Every person has his or her unique identity
If you are living in a society
Different cultures have different occasions
8/10
There were some grammatical mistakes, but overall it was very good. Commendable effort!
See lessEssay on Favorite book
* I keep books biographies, novels and religious books. which was written this book is about their lives this is a very famous book Good effort 7/10
* I keep books
biographies, novels and religious books.
which was written
this book is about
their lives
this is a very famous book
Good effort
7/10
See lessEssay on Language
9/10 Excellent! There are some sentences which have an issue regarding parallelism, but apart from those others are really good.
9/10
Excellent!
See lessThere are some sentences which have an issue regarding parallelism, but apart from those others are really good.
Essay on Favorite Teacher
*I am an introvert I communicate less with others There were many teachers who taught me because of his teaching methodology my relationship with him was very special Whenever I faced a problem, I always sought his help I was able to have a sound understanding of Chemistry due to him He was very corRead more
*I am an introvert
I communicate less with others
There were many teachers who taught me
because of his teaching methodology
my relationship with him was very special
Whenever I faced a problem, I always sought his help
I was able to have a sound understanding of Chemistry due to him
He was very cordial towards me
He always motivated me and actuated me
5/10
There were many grammatical mistakes, please write down the second draft in the comment box below. Try to learn from the mistakes.
See lessEssay on Government
* They are Rights of citizens Very good effort 8/10
* They are
Rights of citizens
Very good effort
See less8/10
Essay on Work
* who has never done work in his or her life The job you do to earn money is work Every task which is productive in some manner can be considered as work Or we become lethargic The more active we are, the more productive we become 5/10 Please write it again the in the comment box. There were many grRead more
* who has never done work in his or her life
The job you do to earn money is work
Every task which is productive in some manner can be considered as work
Or we become lethargic
The more active we are, the more productive we become
5/10
Please write it again the in the comment box. There were many grammatical mistakes.
See lessFavorite Country
* But it has also tarnished its image in the world Surrounded by different places I am a love of nature No matter what happen it would also stay close to my heart
* But it has also tarnished its image in the world
See lessSurrounded by different places
I am a love of nature
No matter what happen it would also stay close to my heart
Favorite Number
I admire the number 3 I believe it is my lucky number Call this being superstitious Despite that I have so much affection for it
I admire the number 3
See lessI believe it is my lucky number
Call this being superstitious
Despite that
I have so much affection for it
Favorite City
favorite city I have lived here since my birth cultures It consists of There historical places are admired by the people
favorite city
See lessI have lived here since my birth
cultures
It consists of
There historical places are admired by the people
Animals also have emotions and feel equal pain as humans. We should stop all pharmaceuticals companies from doing trials on innocent animals.
Try to make the introduction a bit more concise. Very good effort 7.5
Try to make the introduction a bit more concise.
See lessVery good effort 7.5
There is an age after which one’s efficiency decreases. Should young people in the working fields replace all the old people?
Band 7
Band 7
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